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kerfloyd
Gem, Maggie, Propheta

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Registered: Sep 2008
 Posted December 21st, 2008 12:41 AM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
(just want to know what people think of my lyrics. tell me honestly)

Rewind


Walking through the pouring rain
Looking all around
Listening for a source of life
Never hearing a sound
But you gave my light
You showed me a better a world
Then it ended in a fight
My worldís turning upside- down
And inside out, and turned around
Families turn against each other
And friends have run away
No one seems to really hear
The things I have to say

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Do you see me?
Can you hear me?
Do you know my name?
Does every name
Have its own face
Or are they all the same?
You canít see me
You canít hear me
You donít know my name
You donít care
What I think
To you itís all the same

Run Away
Run Away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Now youíre back
And I must say
Youíve never been so wrong
Iíve never been so over you
Your memoryís long gone

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Looking back
Laughing hard
Seeing life so clear
Iím just ready
To move on
The ending isnít near

I try to be good, but I take after my mother

{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}
   
agonini
Friendlee

Posts: 10971
Registered: Oct 2008
 Posted December 21st, 2008 12:48 AM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
L.o.v.e it!!
Keep it up dear!
-hugs-
Now youíre back
And I must say
Youíve never been so wrong
Iíve never been so over you
Your memoryís long gone

Looking back
Laughing hard
Seeing life so clear
Iím just ready
To move on
The ending isnít near


{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female_or_Male}{Genre: Everything}
   
saggirl73
Socks

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Registered: Oct 2008
 Posted December 21st, 2008 12:51 AM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
*smiles*
i like it.


You rock my socks, you rule my world. Lets dance.{Genre: Everything}{Gend: Female_or_Male}{gen: Semi-Serious}
   
loveless
Cashew

Posts: 127
Registered: Aug 2008
 Posted December 21st, 2008 05:05 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
Whoa that's bloody fantastic! Do you play intstruments as well?
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kerfloyd
Gem, Maggie, Propheta

Posts: 3143
Registered: Sep 2008
 Posted December 21st, 2008 09:13 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
i'm learning to play the piano and the clarinet
i have a couple friends who are amazing at the piano
and one that plays guitar

I try to be good, but I take after my mother

{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}
   
kerfloyd
Gem, Maggie, Propheta

Posts: 3143
Registered: Sep 2008
 Posted October 11th, 2009 10:18 AM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
Rewind (revised)

Walking through the pouring rain
And all you do is stare
I'm searching for a source of light
As if you really care
Families turn against each other
Friends have run away
And no one seems
To really hear
The things I have to say

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Do you see me
Can you hear me
Do you know my name
Does every face
Have it's own name
Or are they all the same

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Now you're back
And I must say
You've never been more wrong
I've never been so over you
Your memory long gone

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Looking back
Laughing hard
Seeing life so clear
I'm so ready
To move on
Can't do it with you here


well, i've had that thing revised for awhile. just forgot i posted the original on here. what do you guys think? better? worse?

I try to be good, but I take after my mother

{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}
   



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