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kerfloyd
Gem, Maggie, Propheta

Posts: 3143
Registered: Sep 2008

Posted December 21st, 2008 12:41 AM IP

(just want to know what people think of my lyrics. tell me honestly)

Rewind

Walking through the pouring rain
Looking all around
Listening for a source of life
Never hearing a sound
But you gave my light
You showed me a better a world
Then it ended in a fight
My world’s turning upside- down
And inside out, and turned around
Families turn against each other
And friends have run away
No one seems to really hear
The things I have to say

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Do you see me?
Can you hear me?
Do you know my name?
Does every name
Have its own face
Or are they all the same?
You can’t see me
You can’t hear me
You don’t know my name
You don’t care
What I think
To you it’s all the same

Run Away
Run Away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Now you’re back
And I must say
You’ve never been so wrong
I’ve never been so over you
Your memory’s long gone

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Want to hit rewind

Looking back
Laughing hard
Seeing life so clear
I’m just ready
To move on
The ending isn’t near

I try to be good, but I take after my mother

{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}

agonini Friendlee Posts: 10967 Registered: Oct 2008	Posted December 21st, 2008 12:48 AM IP L.o.v.e it!! Keep it up dear! -hugs- Now you’re back And I must say You’ve never been so wrong I’ve never been so over you Your memory’s long gone Looking back Laughing hard Seeing life so clear I’m just ready To move on The ending isn’t near {gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female_or_Male}{Genre: Everything}

saggirl73 Socks Posts: 1667 Registered: Oct 2008	Posted December 21st, 2008 12:51 AM IP smiles i like it. You rock my socks, you rule my world. Lets dance.{Genre: Everything}{Gend: Female_or_Male}{gen: Semi-Serious}

loveless Cashew Posts: 127 Registered: Aug 2008	Posted December 21st, 2008 05:05 PM IP Whoa that's bloody fantastic! Do you play intstruments as well? {Gend: Male}{gen: Semi-Serious}

kerfloyd Gem, Maggie, Propheta Posts: 3143 Registered: Sep 2008	Posted December 21st, 2008 09:13 PM IP i'm learning to play the piano and the clarinet i have a couple friends who are amazing at the piano and one that plays guitar I try to be good, but I take after my mother {gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}

kerfloyd
Gem, Maggie, Propheta

Posts: 3143
Registered: Sep 2008

Posted October 11th, 2009 10:18 AM IP

Rewind (revised)

Walking through the pouring rain
And all you do is stare
I'm searching for a source of light
As if you really care
Families turn against each other
Friends have run away
And no one seems
To really hear
The things I have to say

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Do you see me
Can you hear me
Do you know my name
Does every face
Have it's own name
Or are they all the same

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Now you're back
And I must say
You've never been more wrong
I've never been so over you
Your memory long gone

Run away
Run away
Leave the past behind
Turned around
Almost drowned
Wanna hit rewind

Looking back
Laughing hard
Seeing life so clear
I'm so ready
To move on
Can't do it with you here

well, i've had that thing revised for awhile. just forgot i posted the original on here. what do you guys think? better? worse?

I try to be good, but I take after my mother

{gen: Semi-Serious}{Gend: Female}{Genre: Everything}

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